PocketPollution's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Flim]

Very very nice.

I think what really made the whole flash for me was the artsy, construction-papery look of things. The water moving back in forth was just like something you might see in a puppet show, as was the boat and many other things.

The character was also really fun to look at... mainly because he/she almost never just stood still: he/she was always doing something or expressing him/herself in much the same way people in real life do.

For a such a simple animation, I never expected this much depth. Good work my friend.

biblo responds:

well if you like the cutout style you should check it out on youtube. it looks even more cutout like

[The Bloody Avenger]

Not bad for a first!

I like your art style and I think you really have great potential. For a first submission this is really good!

However, there are definitely some areas for improvement:
1. Choppiness: the animation needs to be smoother.
2. Sound: music was good, but sound effects have the ability to greatly improve an animation.
3. Speed: some scenes went by too quickly while others weren't fast enough.

A tip for fixing number one: Increase the frame rate and add blurs behind the characters to show where they used to be and what motion they're making: at a fast enough speed, this will trick the eye into thinking you did a hell of a lot more animation than you actually did.

If you want to keep some scenes the same length then don't keep the same speed: you should still speed it up. Instead, just increase the number of frames.

ImaginaryLog responds:

Thanks for this constructive review of yours =).
I' ll try to make my upcoming animations smoother and the next flash will definitely be in colour.
Speed: I set the frame rate up to 24 f/s.

[Madness Inundation]

Yay Jebus!

Loved the movie. I think all your works are pure genious and you definitely progressed in quality of over the years.

Since I assume this is the final episode, I must say its a great ending to a great series. I like how you worked the improbability drive from the previous episodes into this one and how everything ended up.

I do however, think that above all else madness should continue. I mean, lets face it, everybody wants moar! Moar action. Moar violence. Moar madness.

In my humble opinion, the best way to continue madness would be to start a new series in the same style with different characters, different plot, but the same amount of violence and gore if not more so.

Or just make another episode called "Madness: Reborn" and bring hank back. ^_^

Whatever you do or wherever you go, its all good. Just know that we here at NG always support you!

[The hold up]

Nice One

Really liked the style: it was very unique. The violence was slightly unexpected but certainly added a lot to the movie.

Simply make more and make longer.

Good vibes, mate!

[Lonely Days End Strangely]

Wonderful!... until the end.

Great movie 'till the end. I have to say that really ruined the movie for me. I liked the combination of photographs and animation: very original and very cool style. Please redo the ending and resubmit: if not for me, then for all the little children who I might torture if you don't.

[Stick Dance]

Not bad.

May want to put in a warning about how this may cause seizures. A little flashy for my tastes but pretty cool. Next time, how about drawing a person instead of just a stick figure?

[Wright Talks About Yams]

Sweet!... potatos.

This totally gets a nine spuds out of ten only because of the annoying explosion that you used waaaaay to much. (as opposed to getting ten out of ten) Liked the vid. Pretty damn funny. Keep it up!

BaconSamurai responds:

Hey, thanks for the tip. We took out some explosions.

[OTW-Fishcat Catfish]

Damn you fishcat!

You and your catfish stealing ways!

Work on your artistry and you might have some potential.

[Rejected by NewGrounds]

Wow

Please don't tell others what to think. Frankly, this flash is pointless: newgrounders will vote whatever the hell they please regardless of what you would like. If you really didn't want to have your flash blammed, then take the time to really develop. Instead of wasting 6 hours, how about taking several DAYS and then making front page?

Instead of wasting more of your life making crappy flash, how about taking the time to make something good?

[Magician]

Nice!

Sweet animation. Everything is smooth and clean. Jokes are awesome. Couldn't ask for anything other than more, more, more!